Title : The Problem of Being Too Fat
Thesis : Being too fat is commonly known
as overweight or obesity. It is simply defined as too much body fat inside.
Overweight potentially leads high risk of health problem.
Arguments : 1) Being too fat is recognized as a
major factor for heart disease. Due to the overweight, the heart will work
harder. It can lead to the heart attack.
2)Furthermore, obesity potentially rises
blood cholesterol and blood pressure.
3) In addition, being too fat can change
the amount of sugar in the blood. This will cause diabetes and other serous
disease.
4) Beside all of that, being too fat is
often avoided by many young women. They said that becoming too fat will bother
their physical beauty appearance.
Reiteration :More serious studies are necessary to see
the effect of obesity. However it is clear enough that overweight is not good
enough for healthy life.
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